帮我点评下这篇英语作文(有额外加分)

2025-06-26 07:34:58
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Chinese are so open that too many pornographic topics here. It's better to explain more about "open mind" bring us the benefits than introducing basic points.

study more conjunctions such as a lot of/lots of as well as tidy up your vocabulary spelling.