It---It's
fine day--- a fine day
want go ---want to go
roo---zoo
sever---seven
on bus---by bus或on a bus
有六处错误。
改后的
第一句it is a fine day 第二句want to go to the zoo 第三句 seven 第四句 by bus
应该是It is a fine today,my sister and I want to go to the zoo.We eat breakfast at seven thirty.We go there by bus.后面的就不知道了!o(∩_∩)o...呵呵!
It---It's
fine day--- a fine day
want go ---want to go
have breakfast ---have a breakfast
on bus---by bus
It--It's
fine day-- a fine day
want go --want to go
have breakfast --have a breakfast
on bus--by bus
不是on,bus,是by,bus,