英语作文 In my city(五句话)

My city in future

I think my city will be very beautiful in the future。
There will be fewer buses and cars。People will use Small Cars to go out。This kind of cars won't make any pollution(污染） and it will be very safe。And I think there will be more trees in the streets。They can make the air（空气） cleaner。
I hope my dream will come true（实现）。

这个可以吗

在我的城市的意思： I hate the traffic, the confusing design of highways in my city and thelong periods of claustrophobic sitting with nothing to do but listen tothe radio.
我讨厌堵车、讨厌我所在的城市公路那种令人一头雾水的设计，还有长时间一个人坐在车里什么也干不成只能听收音机的惨状。